Advantages and Disadvantages Video Playlist

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4/17/2019 Introduction to Self-Correction (and Joko's new space) I had a very profound teaching experience today with a complete stranger who paid me nothing for it. The idea was to try out this idea for a technique that mirrors how I try to teach in a real life classroom situation via Facebook. Guidance given, trying to get the student to come along... Introduction to Self-Correction (and Joko's new space)
4/17/2019 Self-Correction 1: The First Draft Our student today has written a Task 2 about the benefits and disadvantages of tourist visiting extreme environments. Lets see how he starts his day of self-correction tutoring. Self-Correction 1: The First Draft
4/17/2019 Self-correction 2 - The Second Draft Part 1 needed for this to make sense. Self-correction 2 - The Second Draft
6/25/2019 Increased University Attendance - Advantages/Disadvantages (GT) Here is an IELTS essay wherein the writer loses marks for basic grammar points like subject/verb agreement, articles, and for some reason, capitalization (counts as grammar) of words. It follows the memorized [structure that so many teachers profess... More in the blog at IELTStemple.blogspot.com Increased University Attendance - Advantages/Disadvantages (GT)
6/11/2019 Adv/Dis - Easy Credit (part 1) Technical difficulties But I don't want to do it again for the 5th time Adv/Dis - Easy Credit (part 1)
6/11/2019 Adv/Dis - Easy Credit (part 2) The Temple looks at an essay of the Advantage/Disadvantage General Training. Adv/Dis - Easy Credit (part 2)
9/27/2019 Adv/Disadv Essay: Using the Internet for Education - Stuck at 6.5 writing for GT. One of my first paying clients. I gave him a big discount , but I never got paid and he never submitted another essay. It was too difficult to receive payments from South Africa anyways. Adv/Disadv Essay: Using the Internet for Education - Stuck at 6.5 writing for GT.
6/11/2019 What are the advantages and disadvantages of easy credit? GT (Part 3) Sorry for the loud ukulele playing halfway through. What are the advantages and disadvantages of easy credit? GT (Part 3)
6/12/2019 To Score High in TR, Support Your Support! IELTS Adv/Disadv Essay, Largely Younger Populations Hridi made some improvements over her last essay, but demonstrates another gate to get through. To Score High in TR, Support Your Support! IELTS Adv/Disadv Essay, Largely Younger Populations
9/3/2019 Employers Asking For Qualifications - Avoid overly long sentences. See! Even YouTube won't let you exceed 100 characters Employers Asking For Qualifications - Avoid overly long sentences.
12/3/2019 From Team World: Advantages vs Disadvantages - Gap year One of the big weaknesses often seen in Team World crops up here - the attempt to use "high-level" vocabulary where it doesn't belong. From Team World: Advantages vs Disadvantages - Gap year
12/3/2019 Private video This video is private. Private video
12/5/2019 Advice for Team World from a musician: the danger of trying to "play" English beyond your ability. Stick to the chords and notes you know - you can still make beautiful music with them. Sorry Team World. One good thing had come of it - your essays have inspired me to begin producing the next in a series of question-type specific lessons for Task 2. Next on the list, Advantages and Disadvantages. Advice for Team World from a musician: the danger of trying to "play" English beyond your ability.
12/23/2019 Similarly, the Following Needs to be Similar Four video reviews for the same student? He's not even paying me to do this. It's just coincidence based on how I pick the essays I review. There are a couple points I started to make in the video that I didn't finish or develop. At 3:36, I say "I'm going to suggest something here..." and the thing I wanted to suggest was actually that you do not write your first sentence until you have finished your last sentence. Leave a space. Write the rest of it, and then at the end, come back to the top and ask yourself, "how can I start this in a way that will refer to everything that comes after it?" As it stands, the first line has next to nothing to do with the rest of the essay. Similarly, the Following Needs to be Similar
4/28/2020 Why is that an Advantage? A GT Adv/Dis regarding multi-national corporations Why is that an Advantage?
9/17/2020 Two Part Question answering half of one.. From Greece! A new member's first submission. She has the language skills, just needs the essay skills. Two Part Question answering half of one.. From Greece!
7/24/2023 Taking Risks By Any Other Name Do the advantages of something the question tells us is important outweigh the position presented as inferior? Taking Risks By Any Other Name

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